Me, Myself and I [Self Evaluation]

I can honestly say my writing has improved from being a lot from being in English 15. I have always been a strong english student so I thought this course was going to be a piece of cake. I soon learned that this English class was not going to be as easy as I expected because it forced me to look at my writing on a closer level than I have ever done before.
This semester I learned a lot about editing my papers. The peer reviews we did were very helpful because they gave me another perspective on my papers. They also helped reveal minor mistakes that I may have looked over. I also learned to use all the resources available to me on campus. Going to the writing center was helpful because the more eyes that review your paper the better. Also going to office hours and talking about minor concerns I had about my writing clarified many issues for me.
My favorite writing assignment we had this semester was the memoir unit. I liked that unit the most because it helped make my writing more clear and precise. The memoir made me focus on one specific situation with depth, which was harder than it originally sounded.
The other units like the visual analysis and the research paper we had to do also helped me focus on specific details. I learned that it is more effective for me to write specific about one issue, than trying boldly covering over many issues.
I think this course sharpened my writing skills tremendously.
The cultural events we had to attend were a nice aspect to add to the class. The events I attended were two events I would have attended anyways without the assignment. It was still nice to see how many cultural opportunities Penn State has available to the students. I think that it is important for all students to attend cultural events because they broaden your mind and help you look at life with a different perspective.
I also like writing a blog for this course because I enjoyed reading the responses my classmates had on different things. Although we are all about the same age we come from different cultures, and towns so we all have different opinions on everything.

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3. I completed my SRTE.

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“You’re the one that gives your all. You’re the one I can always call. When I need to make everything stop finally you put my love on top.” As an artist who has won Grammys and awards, Beyoncé is definitely at the top her game. She is at a place in her career where she can make an album that reflects the experiences she is going through in her life. The southern sweetheart released her fourth studio album on June 28, 2011 that she titled “4”. Although it was leaked onto the internet a few weeks before its release, it still managed to sell 310,000 copies in its first week. “4” has a different feel than her other previously released albums. It focuses heavy on being happy in a monogamous relationship which mirrors her life currently. She is currently what seems to be happily married to Jay Z. Her previous albums had songs like “Me, Myself, and I” which was about women in unhappy relationships that needed to focus on what’s best for themselves. We can see how she has stepped away from that message to a message that is showing women it is okay to be head over heels in love.

Beyoncé’s “4” has many more ballads and slow songs than we usually get from the songstress. She tests her singing abilities on many of these tracks in ways the world is not used to. This album shows how versatile she is because she pulls different types of genres together and makes it her own. “4” has some reflections of R&B, pop, vintage soul, rap, and reggae. She has featured artist like Kanye West, and Andre 3000 who both have two different styles of music. Beyoncé doesn’t completely forget her roots as she has songs like “Run the World”, “Countdown”, and “End of Time” which are upbeat dance songs that still exude her overall message of love.

With this album Beyoncé has opened up to the world in a different way. She is not afraid to say she is in love and is in a good place. The fans really connect with this album because we have all watched Beyoncé grow from a young teenage member of Destiny Child who sang about being an independent woman, to a wife and mother. Beyoncé is singing new songs now that say “And it’s me and you and that’s all we’ll have when the world is through. Cause baby we aint got nothing without love.”

Black Girls Rock [cultural event]

I attended an event put on by the Back Student Union called "Black Girls Rock". The event mimicked an event put on annually by BET that commemorates the achievements and accomplishments of African American women. It was held in Heritage Hall in the Hub.The program included a fashion show representing different eras along with students putting on skits to honor some exceptional women. Women were recognized from the music industry, sports, and the academic world. I have been to similar events that uplift the great work the African American community has done. They ran out of the fried chicken and we were stuck eating wraps which weren't that good . I expected this event to recognize more modern day women, but i still enjoyed it

The most memorable part was the performance by grammy award winning songwriter and singer Melanie Fiona. She sang some material from her new album and we all went wild. I always knew she was talented  but seeing her live made me appreciate her talent even more. When she hit the stage she immediately connected with the audience. She sang about love, and heartache something that almost everyone in our age bracket can relate to. I definitely will purchase her album after experiencing her performance.

My overall experience was a good one. The performance made me enjoy the show as much as I did.  If the food was better it would have been a perfect night!

vagina monologues vs. penis monologues [cultural event]

Why are people so uncomfortable with the word vagina? How much do you know about penises? The Vagina Monologues and the Penis Monologues were both productions put on by Penn State students set out to answer these questions. Coincidently they were both being performed on the same weekend and only a few rooms apart in the Forum building. They both used humor and stories to educate the students of Penn State about their bodies without making anyone feel awkward or uncomfortable. In my opinion the Vagina Monologues was more educationally enriching, while Penis Monologues focused more on humor and irony.

            The Vagina Monologues is a nationally known production that is reenacted by different women all based on the original Vagina Monologues created in 1996.  In Penn State’s rendition they had women of different races and backgrounds perform skits about sex, love, rape, masturbation, birth, menstruation, orgasms and about how they all relate to vaginas. They made jokes about how uncomfortable tampons can be and what vaginas would say if they could talk. They also touched on international struggles of Japanese women who were repeatedly raped physically, mentally, and emotionally by soldiers. This part of the show really touched me because the actress who spoke about this delivered it with so much passion and pain I felt like I was really listening to one of the abused women. Day after day the Japanese women were forced to have sexual intercourse with hundreds of soldiers. They wouldn’t allow these women to get properly cleaned, use protection, eat proper meals, or keep the babies they had as a result of this traumatic experience. It was really disheveling to know that innocent, and young women had to go through that kind of pain and helplessness. This skit really had an impact on me because these young women were about the same age as I am and I couldn’t imagine going through that type of abuse and disrespect. The worse part of the whole scene was that the Japanese government tried to ignore the situation like it never happened. They swept it under the rug like the blood, and tears these women shed were insignificant. Hearing that really upset me. All these women wanted in return was a public apology from the government saying that they acknowledge the pain they suffered and they are sorry that they had to experience that. That is honestly the least they could have done for them.

            I had never heard of the Penis Monologues so I was very interested to see what they are all about. It was a show inspired by the vagina monologues but the twist was that it was for guys. The purpose of the monologues is to give a funny parody about penises. The actors in this production made jokes about blue balls, oral sex, masturbation, penises in cold water and other stereotypes people male about penises. The Penis Monologues gave men the opportunity to jokingly talk about embarrassing sexual experiences, and insecurities. My favorite moment was at the ending when all of the actors ran out into the audience and jumped up on the arm rests of the chairs and yelled out their favorite nicknames for their penises. They also yelled out orgasmic sounds and it was very amusing. I learned there are lots of names people call penises because they are uncomfortable with the word. They kept the crowd very engages in the entire performance.

            Overall I enjoyed both performances and enjoyed seeing how each director interpreted two very different yet similar body parts. If anyone is interested in a light and comedic show I would recommend the penis monologues but if they wanted an amusing and educational show I would recommend the vagina monologues.